Semester Task: Summary


The article ‘Why a bad mistake at work can be good news’ written by Donna Ferguson is devoted to the discussion of the problem of people’s attitude to their mistakes in a career. 
First, the author emphasizes that mistakes or failures in the career can affect on our self-esteem and self-confidence which can make some  people feel miserable.
Donna Ferguson analyzes that for most of people it is difficult to accept their mistakes, people  just refuse them, especially if they are serious ones. We should remember that it’s quite natural for all people make mistakes. They serve us to analyze them, make conclusions and become wiser little by little. However, after making mistakes some people become depressed and broken.
She gives an example of a chief executive of the ‘Young Gamers & Gamblers Education Trust’ Lee Willows who stole nineteen thousand pounds from his hirer. Lee Willows hated himself for it and thought that he had made the biggest mistake in his life. However, he was managed to accept his fault, he confessed his crime and began doing great things in life, such as founding the charity.
In addition, the author suggests that, If we learn to admit our own mistakes, we’ll be able to be emotional stable to them and draw some conclusions.
Finally, the author concludes that our mistakes can seem to us serious with horrible consequences, but we all should remember that making mistakes doesn’t mean the end of the world. We should just cope with that, overcome our obstacles and be wiser, as our mistakes don’t make us worse, vice versa, they make us stronger.


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  1. attitude to their mistakes in **a (ART) > THEIR career
    can affect **on (PREP) our self-esteem
    analyzes that for most **of (PREP) people > for most people
    people refuse mistakes (LangUse) > people refuse to acknowledge their mistakes
    natural for all people make mistakes > natural <...> TO make mistakes
    They serve us to analyze them: not clear what you meant by this
    he was managed to accept his fault: why Passive?
    founding **the (ART) charity
    Punctuation: suggests that, If we learn to admit our own mistakes > no comma before "If"
    but we all should remember: WWO
    We should just cope with ***that: with WHAT? what does "THAT" refer to?
    don’t make us worse, vice versa, they make us stronger: use "on the contrary" instead of "vice versa". Check when it is used at: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/vice-versa/ and compare it with "on the contrary" at: https://forum.wordreference.com/threads/vice-versa-vs-on-the-contrary.1233959/

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  2. Yana,

    your summary is good from the point of view of its content and organisation but it is not quite satisfactory from the point of view of its grammar use. Also, there are certain problems with language use.

    Content: 5
    Organisation: 5
    Mechanics: 3
    Language: 4

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